Transparent read!

    Are my thoughts

     just like ghosts?

That pass through walls,

 the slightest of ease

 reading other minds;

    laid before me

      in brickwalls,

  behind closed doors.

  Transparent are we

  thoughts displayed

 clear as the windows

   they pass through.

Reviews

[McBear]

Hmm. Yes, I agree with the person below.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Poison

[McBear]

:) My pleasure

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they aren't transparent, they forceful, and yes, they pass through the walls of others' minds...as poets, we are out there for all to see...there is depth...but yes, others can see through our walls when we write.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob for your words