Its not going to work...

Look my Darling

if you are

going to scream

everytime I peep

through your kitchen window

from the bushes I hide

our relationship is not

going to work no-more.

Reviews

[zunie frost]

wow ... nice and short work !!! really like it

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Zunie Its just a cheeky Joke

[zunie frost]

i know but it's rhymes are good

[zunie frost]

well it gives me an idea about writting my new poem

[andrew mitchell]

Good on you, let your music flow!!!

[zunie frost]

thanks .. i'll try my best

[andrew mitchell]

I shall read it

[zunie frost]

oky sure !!!

[McBear]

Yep, communication is honestly key in a relationship. Well written I loved it

[andrew mitchell]

lol yes it is I don't know about being a Stalker though which I'm not but was just a joke

[McBear]

Haha, yes. I believe you

[jesserose99]

And how could it...communication problems from the get go Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

lol so true Jesse but this was just cheeky humour lol. Thanks for dropping in.:)

[jesserose99]

I know...that was my poor attempt at humor too...ha ha...ok...maybe should lock that one in the vault!

[andrew mitchell]

lol.......................