Domestic violence

                                Domestic violence

                             Of the colours spread

                             her soft pink with red,

                                        love,

                                     he added

                                  blue and purple.

                                 Cowardly was he

                               on colours selected;

                                       violence 

                                         over 

                                         love.

                                 Castrate the B*****d

                                    throw him in jail,

                                           rot

                                      in the violence

                                         he shed.

Reviews

[zunie frost]

really good ... i like these line " Cowardly was he
on colours selected;
violence
over
love.

Castrate the B*****d
throw him in jail,
rot
in the violence
he shed.
really great piece of work 90 % ratings from me

[andrew mitchell]

I shall do better to get 100% from you lol. Just kidding I thank you very much dear poet.:)

[zunie frost]

hehehhe no you are good !!! even better ... well i 'll sure remember to give you 100 next time

[andrew mitchell]

lol..................... :):):)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if only the punishment was exacted to match the crime...those who do this would feel what it is like to be abused...there is no justice enough for these people....

[andrew mitchell]

well Pistorius got his dues Gulity of murder! Hooray at last!

[Cassie]

damn that person, especially fathers who molest their young daughters. They ought to be castrated slowly, bit by bit..

[andrew mitchell]

I agree Thanks Cassie