Her blanket covered.

Her blanket covered

Blanketed her thoughts

covered

only I viewed

naked.

The warmth coccooned

her story read

between the lines

I discovered her love.

Reviews

[B]

this is quite sweet
i guess there is always this one person that can see through a woman's daily cover
he can get her

so sweet

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha thank you for your kind words on a make believe write lol.

[B]

lol
we are poetic inclined to imagine :)

[andrew mitchell]

Of course life i can be repetitive if we don't use our imagination. stop looking at me like that! hee hee!

[B]

lol
we should write together
that should be super interesting and not repetitive !!!

[andrew mitchell]

I think all excited I would do A stupid write not befitting for a great poet as you lol!

[B]

lol
i suck i am just trying lol
hmmmmm
if you start i will follow