A Holy Party! ( with special guest star nisreen)

My first combo/ duet with my dear kind friend Nisreen. Thank you Nisreen for the push! :)

                 A Holy Party!

               God was having

           Xmas cheer this year;

               a human moment

                    apparently.

           Christmas invites only.

                    He said:

 " Please dress for the body you have

     and not the body you want

                   this year."

        It is foolish to do otherwise

       A costume hidden by thieves

   Stacks of layering meant to conceive

            An image uncrowned

               Practice in form

       Only comfortable in my own.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

I had to laugh when I read "please dress for the body you have and not the body you want this year." Awesome collab :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my dear friend Aaron

[B]

Andrew's liine lol
Thanks Aaron

[B]

It is foolish to do otherwise
A costume hidden by thieves

Stacks of layering meant to conceive
An image uncrowned

Practice in form
Only comfortable in my own

[andrew mitchell]

Wow I like part two of my poem! I wonder who wrote this!!!!!!!!!!

[B]

lol
who who lol

[andrew mitchell]

Should we combine the two Nisreen

[B]

yes we should :P

[andrew mitchell]

you have done well Nis And I thank you for tempting me lol

[B]

u r a good friend Andrew
One day when i come to Australia
well ..... we surely should get together

[jacob erin-cilberto]

be comfortable in your own skin...just be you....excellent write.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for your kind words Jacob

[B]

Thank you Dear J