Insiduous!

Insiduous!

Insiduous,

the thoughts

that devour

thoughts 

good.

I'm left

in the end

feeling 

hungry.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. I like the word "Insiduous". One of those words that create reaction. Nice ending to the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

I like insiduous, sounds dark and foreboding. Thank you John

[Coyote Poetry]

It does and you are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wonder why that is...the negative thoughts last so long, are so hard to get rid of, as the positive thoughts seem so fleeting...

nice metaphor...the good ones are eaten up by the bad ones.

[andrew mitchell]

So true like nightmares or problems that are not easily solved linger the most while positive thoughts are light and fluffy!