Empty!

Empty

were his emotions removed

from the nest he grew in

not ready

crying

now told.......

                     march on.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

So many now return after leaving. And often bring children and in some cases the spouse. Maybe that's what it will take for family to mean something again.

Now that I did the serious part, funny how that surprise comes alone, some should get the message much earlier.

Nice, well done. And fun??

[andrew mitchell]

So evident now with the cost of living children are staying home much longer! Thank you for your words Willard

[wordman]

so many young men have been through this !

[andrew mitchell]

haha that day comes! Thank you Wordman

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is very hard. I went to war and return 15 years later. Only damaged house and memories were left. The poem said a lot in so few words. Thank you Andrew for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Life is hard and thank you John

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

gotta grow up sometime...and sometimes the kids just have to be pushed out of the nest in order for them to learn to fly.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

So true J but they are staying home longer cos its cheaper in a survey

[Einstein Noodle]

thats right ..hit the road you juvenal lion male ..git out d nest you fledgling eagle .. you have all the feathers you need .. why do you think i took the down out and bared the pokey sticks :) very smart play on an empty nest ... occurring at both ends .. in reading i have a very particular young son fitting this bill ..good stuff sir!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks E lol Its too expensive to move out these days for kids so they are staying home longer

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ..sadly so true ... i know who i blame >:/

[zunie frost]

nice one !!!! i like it ....