The laws of attraction

The laws of attraction

The laws of attraction

they say.... is just

like maths.

They're right you know!

On trying to attract

one adds on to the income

covering the costs

of such indulgences.

In the pursuit, hungry

we subtract from our weight

to look attractive.

Only to find we

divide our time.

Instantaneous was the speed

of distance travelled

over time in the passion

clothes being removed

as the velocity of two 

masses in love moved

in one direction.

Then we see her.....

attractive all over.....

she 's all pie squared;

geometry and trig

covered her naked body area, 

bedded on the measurements travelled.

It was always game on 

trying to avoid

multiplication

as one liked binary fusion.

Looking back,

I was an electron

encircling her love atom,

then the collision...

nuclear fission.

the skies lit in the 

chain reaction.

One counts the days 

waiting for the laws

of attraction to begin,

again.

I'm trying to calculate-her!

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Who's calculating who??? :)

Another romp through the hallways of your mind as you bring imagery of a nuclear reactor to love. It adds up you know.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Willard just fun with the numbers game in love's corner! lol

[Cassie]

mmhhhhh..you must have been a good maths student or economics student

[andrew mitchell]

Maths was easy, the attraction was harder! lol

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I love this! I actually did something like this called Calcul-us, but yours is so much better! Truly unique and awesome piece of art here, Andrew :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Lynn its funny how maths can apply to everything in life lol starting with attraction. Thanks for the lovely words Lynn:):0

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My pleasure :)

[jesserose99]

this is lovely...I read nirseen's comments and realized that I am....not good at math...lol. yet it was still an excellent poem to me...I could feel their attraction juuuust fine. :)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you kind jesse

[marcus]

What an interesting and apt analogy Andrew, I really enjoyed it!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you marcus, glad you did!

[B]

lol
and she is simply an equation that could bring back sir Einstein from the grave
undiscovered
Calculating to nothing and everything
Lost in so many atoms

A galaxy of her own

this one is funny

[andrew mitchell]

Just silly fun for the silly season, thank you Nis. You didn't tell me you were good at maths lol;)

[B]

i suck lol

[andrew mitchell]

lol I was just going to call you Nisreen einstein but what a princess in poetry

[sheandherself]

Ahhhhhh I'm loving this! The idea itself is great.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much sheandherself