Tick tock tick!

Tick tock tick!

Tick tock tick

echoed the time

loudly, down

hallways, empty.

Tick tock ticks

filling the air, lonely

time spent death

life's journey.

Ticking, tick tocks

haunting, bellows,

fireplace cold,

walls talk creepy.

Tick tock tick tock

the silence grows

almighty.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when we are sad and lonely, the time sounds the loudest...when our life is fulfilled we hardly notice it going by....

[andrew mitchell]

spot on j right on the money!

[Im His Daughter]

You are a very good writer.. keep up the good work.

[andrew mitchell]

Why thank you, you are too kind:)