I seek you,Time!

                   I seek you, Time! 

             

                 From where I speak

                    it is you I seek

                         Time!

             You slip through sands

              of lives you command.

                      I'm falling

                    in the times!

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

Say pretty neat ditty here. I was thinking wouldn't it be neat to see if you could make the lines fit somehow in an hour glass.

[andrew mitchell]

hey! great idea! thank you!

[Cryingkate]

Good luck I never tried it myself... :-)
really is a neat poem even without the fancies

[Cryingkate]

Actually, take another look at it... It is almost like you subconsciously almost did it-)

[andrew mitchell]

haha i did indeed! not intended either1

[Cryingkate]

Yeah crazy how that muse/harmonic sphere/consciousness thingy works.
I think that's what gave me the thought actually.
When I looked at it a second time I saw it.
Ok don't you have a baby to birth? shhhh...New Baby coming