Carried I was..

Carried I was.....

On a wisp of smoke

I was carried

in thought

only to land

in reflection.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i am wisping away with the smoke ..no limitsthen held in tow by that damn reflecting ... ;) such a short piece that cut me loose and suddenly brought me down ..nice ride come to think of it.,..like a roller coaster :))
E.

[Cool Girl]

It takes true talent in order to form a spectacular poem in just a few words! Well done, my friend! You are fantastic! Keep calm and write on :) -CG

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind words CG, sometimes you pull one off! lol others get lost when you don't write them down!

[Cool Girl]

Haha you're welcome and thank you! I hope to read more of your work soon, my dearest Australian friend :)

[Willard Wells]

After reflection, possibly resolution. Good luck. Well done and fun.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Willard for your kind words

[Valentine]

This is really good and very catching for just a few words. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kathie and a Merry Xmas to you and yours dear Poet. Be safe!

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This is awesome, Andrew...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you lynn

[Sami Khalil]

"Carried I was.....

On a wisp of smoke
I was carried
in thought
only to land
in reflection."

[Sami Khalil]

A short but a gorgeous write. I'm still reflecting...:).............

[andrew mitchell]

Sami you are music to my ears when I read your kind review. Thank you my friend!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome musically...:)....................