The speed of light....twinkles.

The speed of light...... twinkles.

At the speed of light

        our love

       did travel

          then

           the

       BIG BANG!

          Love

           was

          gone!

           But

       the stars

     still twinkle

       on what

           was.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

I pictured love being a set of xmas tree lights in this, busily working to find out which light is loose. But when youve got to check, you know something is amiss. Powerful statements fitted into so few lines. Superbly done.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind words alifea

[Willard Wells]

The stars die twinkles millions of years before and will twinkle millions of years after maybe, so what happens to you is rather small in the scope of things. You take love when it finds you. Well done and your a busy little writer the last few days aren't you. hahaha

[andrew mitchell]

Hahaha I have my spurts thank you Willard

[Willard Wells]

I cannot pick on your volume now since I also seem to be dumping a number out right now too.

[andrew mitchell]

haha I shall check!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even after love dies....like a star, we get that twinkle from it for years...maybe some of that light is good memories.

[andrew mitchell]

Of course in the stars our memories lie! Thank you Jacob.