The competitive games!

The competitive games!

A Poem by andrew mitchell
"

fiction based on a movie

"
                                               As my world
                                                pours into
                                                 your cup
                                                  the love
                                                 overflows. 

                                             Another woman
                                                  picks up
                                                on the spill,
                                                 attracted.

                                                    I now 
                                                     find.....
                                                       I
                                                     have....
                                                       I
                                                     see.....
                                                 two rivals.   

© 2015 andrew mitchell


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
...
So childish. Never compete for a man. If he's really interested, you don't have to do a thing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


...

10 Years Ago

used all my sugar making cookies :)
 wordman

10 Years Ago

you din`t send me any lynn! and i love cookies and milk
andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Lynn it happens alot when money is involved, I mean some men are pretty ugly and 80 and they have a .. read more
I do like this poem. Remind me of my father wisdom taught to me. " Only way to forget a woman. Find a another." Nice closing to the excellent poetry Andrew.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

I have often seen how competitive women are in the chase of the same man! Its never happened to me b.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are right. Old dad would of told me. Don't wait. Go find one ASAP.

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

97 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 21, 2015
Last Updated on December 21, 2015

Author

andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



About
Strindberg said. " When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..