Just goodbye!

Just goodbye!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Just goodbye!
No hello
just goodbye

Drowning  silence

No hello
just goodbye
Echoes.....

No hello
just goodbye
Suffering

alone.

Just goodbye.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Sparce touches of emotion, leaving the reader to fill in their own picture. The feeling is sad and empty...hopeless. Very relateable and I like the "less is more" style of writing. Specifically vague...as the reader fills in the specifics out of their own imagination or experience.

Posted 10 Years Ago
Sad but easy to relate to. Sometimes there's nothing there except the pending goodbye. Nice write

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

thanks rocksie

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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