Her dark exposed

Her dark exposed.

Undeveloped,

she

on film

waiting to be

exposed.

In the dark room

I processed

her thoughts

captured,

naked.

Her desires came to light

she.... so composed.

I felt her shadow

lean over, cold

behind me.

Reviews

[Terpsichore]

No negatives here; perfect chemistry. :)

T

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thank you Terpsichore

[gentlekindness]

I like the poem. There are people that send coldness through your spine, even through their beauty.
Nicely penned.
Annie💕💃💃💕

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Annie for your words

[Einstein Noodle]

have never felt a sense of the dark room in such a way .. of mystery and perhaps the afterlife ... wonderful creative use of the metaphor .. great job ..not only placed in the room but i became the developer and felt that cold breath on my neck ... can give one shudders or can be a wondrous final parting ... great job says i! :)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you E I had two themes for this one a woman on film now dead which I didn't develop pardon the pun lol or a mystery woman in the developing room .

[Einstein Noodle]

i think this is a really good poem!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sir :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

waiting to see what parts of her your picture exposed...wow, the metaphor is wickedly good in this one, andrew...and the vivid image you created had me watching her leaning over your shoulder...
and i felt the chill.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob for your kind words, I wanted a eerie presence in the dark room for this write!! lol