It was just a peek!

It was just a peek!

It was just a peek I tell you!

I was pushed! 

I was!

I was looking through the peep-hole

when.....

On entering the world

I wasn't given a key,

trapped I was.

There was no going back,

the door now closed.

All I could do was cry!

Loud!

No-one understood!

I even screamed!

Who did this?

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

you can't just look once...it's kinda like pandora's box ! Life is funny that way, did'nt ask for it, but now that Im here... well.... that's another story for another time.
EXCELLENT WRITE !

bill

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks so much Bill. Indeed life is!!!

[Riddhi]

I really liked this poem..Keep it up and thanks for sharing...

[alifeacoustic]

If you ever find out then let me know, as I have my own list of grievances against them. They could have at least had the decency to put some clothes on me first. Never been so embarrassed in my life :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah yes, birth....who did this to me? who pushed me out that door and into a world i didn't ask to be pushed into...?

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes Jacob lol Who did this to me!! Thank you for your words.

[Willard Wells]

Oh the adventures, once the door closes and your finally in the light. Now it's up to you to ............Nice fun piece again.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Willard, How big the world is, then as you become older it appears smaller!

[Willard Wells]

And I'm a couple inches shorter. I try to blame back surgery, but I don't think they took that much.