The Party

The Party

On arriving late,

the party, somewhat droll,

I bumped into Karma.

I knew that was a mistake!

But everyone was there;

cynical, miserable, sarcasm,

hysterical, sadness, tears, 

laughing, rude, crude,

thoughtless, depressed, grim.

Yes siree! They were all....

done up to the nines!

I didn't see happy, goodluck or manners though.

Apparently, they could not make it!

I decided to leave.

They were all " hangers on"!

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ... not your usual work in this one ... seems a bit disarrayed .. the format is for rhyme and iamb ...
but the poem is totally free ...
i think it needs a naked picture
in party revelry .. and words,
phrases and spacing in complete -----------
;;;;;;
and utter ............................................................disarray!

E.
:)))))
ps oh my .... i think you got it .... by George I think you've gottit!!

[andrew mitchell]

haha I am trying to change my format, more narrative and for interest, an allover the place approach! lol and the audience is the best place to practice on for feedback lol. haha A naked picture in party revelry lol:) Thank you E for your words and the hints :):):):):)

[Einstein Noodle]

love you man! :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol...............................................:) You too E

[alifeacoustic]

Sounds like a typical, everyday, run of the mill party to me. was desperation there too? Usually a fixture at parties here. Great, imaginative write Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Lorry I have never had an exciting party epilogue lol