Today's emotions will be sunny, 32C, storms approaching!

Today's emotions will be sunny, 32C, storms approaching!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Lost in her meandering maze
of thoughts scrambled;
kaleidoscope colours carry
myriad reflections
from emotional pools,
I swim way out, her emotions calm.

Only to be drowning on 
the upheaval of thoughts
she tossed without warning
on feelings rising;
brain salad surgery.

I'm carried swirling,
encircled, spinning
in a whirlpool dazed;
her current thoughts
I travel in mind.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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yes, being in a relationship can often be like this...my second ex...the storms were always looming, but the sunshine was very warm when that sunny disposition was evident.

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you J it's also happening with menopausal changes, poor thing!
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I like the use of words, this certain mood. The last line is awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you mimi

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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