In too deep!

In too deep!

If one could fathom

the unfathomable

one would be left

treading,

in deep waters,

no doubt,

with sharks.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

It's just as well we can't fathom, as I can't swim and can't stand sharks. :)
The unfathomable only hints at what lies beneath and none of us has they eyesight or the lungs to search too deep. Maybe one day we will know the big answers, but until then.....Great write.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks lorry knowing too much can be detrimental!

[Willard Wells]

I read many things, I can take from this, treading water is most difficult when I attempt to fathom my existence, my purpose and especially God. The water is easier to deal with if I understand my limited brain is not prepared for the stress of those larger questions. Well done and apparently thought provoking or it's the fact that I am up at this hour and am not really typing this myself.

[andrew mitchell]

Knowing too much can be a dangerous thing in this world of espionage, like those writers in Hong Kong who disappeared after China did not like the content written.

[B. Boileau]

That's truely deep... (g)

bill

[andrew mitchell]

Lol Thanks bill, just fun with words to tease the reader like you bill lol. I appreciate you dropping by.