Taste buds not ready!

Taste buds not ready!

Sipping on her love

she brewed

I coughed, choked.

It was too much,

too soon her flavour

too strong.

I could not breathe,

she placed on the shelf;

Taste buds not ready.

No sooner announced,

seasonings on hold

she was gone.

Reviews

[David Scott]

I'm thinking of the virtue of patience here... In matters of love, timing is critical.

[andrew mitchell]

Timing is everything David!! So true!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that love that is too much, too soon, almost intimidating...perhaps because we are the ones who are not ready to love again, after much relationship pain.

but it happens for sure.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you J for your words

[Sami Khalil]

A tasty love, a flavorful love and a spicy love. An excellent write...:)................

[andrew mitchell]

You are too kind Sami , thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[alifeacoustic]

Yeah, I've met her too. Small world, isn't it? That girl sure gets around. Everyone I know knows her. That reminds me, I must phone that home security company to get a serious upgrade :)

[andrew mitchell]

ha ha Put in a word too for me thanks Lorry