All knotted!

wacky off the cuff humour

All knotted!

I tried to unwind,

for I felt

my thoughts.....

were twisted.

But to no avail.

I had a knot!

Reviews

[Norman 223]

Optimism has it snags, doesn't it.......

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sir for your words.

[alifeacoustic]

Yes, unwinding in this day and age seems sometimes like an exercise in futility with all we need to juggle just to keep afloat. The perfect cure I think would be the four day weekend. Work three, off four. That'd give those knots a little wiggle room :)

[andrew mitchell]

haha Thanks Lorry just one of my many silly ditties I write

[Gee]

Ouch,last two lines take me back to my vasectomy.I was laying legs raised,freshly shaved,(wearing Brut for Men) having a discussion about golf with a little Asian doctor whilst he changed me from Arthur to Martha.Now if that ain't bad enough there was some stuffy old bird in there who deliberately kept banging into my feet,(felt like telling her to f**k off)anyyway,all of a sudden the quack waves what looked like a piece of macaroni over my nose and gleefully declares,"this is what I've cut out" Why would you do that,what possessed him to think I might enjoy seeing part of my innards waved over my face,weirdo..........How are you by the way,hope all is well.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Gee I do know all about the snip lollol! Thank you for the fantastic gee commentary, the twelve man in poetry. I am good thank you Gee, tired of summer as you are of winter no doubt. Those floods around Cork and that castle with the river reaching 1.5 metres from its walls is scary. I like that castle! How are Gee!

[Gee]

Super,although family are dropping like flies,2 deaths,1 imminent.....I am the albatross

[andrew mitchell]

Sorry to hear that! Stressing times!

[Gee]

Hmmmm,a little,if it ain't my acquaintance out of my control I tend not to fret

[Gee]

Acquaintance......what...causing and out of my....etc