Her swamp.

Her swamp.

On riding first impressions,

on waves deep blue

he was dumped

unceremoniously.

She, heavy in depression,

her sun sliding from view

in a swamp of emotions,

alone.........

they were both sinking.

Drowning....

not knowing what to do.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can see her as someone i have been with...she couldn't love herself, often depressed and thus, couldn't love me...

there is a very deep blue to this theme...

good one, andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you J for your kind words

[Sami Khalil]

Two souls drowning in their own swamps...of emotions. I love it...:)............

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Almighty Sami of Poetic Verse! for your words my friend:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Almighty Andrew. Any time...:).................

[Nisreen]

I guess it must be hard when two people fall in love when they are having a tough time in their own personal lives
I love your work Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much RiverSided and for dropping by. Thanks again!:)

[Nisreen]

You are most welcome

[andrew mitchell]

I smile on riversided!

[Nisreen]

I smile back :)