The Love Virus

The Love Virus.

How could one contain, oneself

when she flaunted herself

naked, so freely.

Not feeling caged

in love contained,

the emotions would spread

together infected.

Infectious, the love virus!

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

i echo Jacob's comment...an honest, heart to soul relationship...
one's long for. i enjoy the endearing imagery & pleasing rhyming
scheme...i adore the touch of whimsy incorporated into this write.
thank you for sharing :) - xo - barrie

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much for your kind words miss. barrie

[Willard Wells]

That's a virus I don't want a vaccine for. I like the infection. Great short verse.

[andrew mitchell]

I'm sure they will find a cure! Its called isis! Thanks Willard

[Willard Wells]

Don't think so in the long term. They're going down. We just have to make some minor adjustment in the background. More night time investment. :)

[andrew mitchell]

I hope so, they are infiltrating society to bring fear and chaos!

[B. Boileau]

Did you ever notice how once infected you become at one with yourself more than any other time? This is one disease I hope they never find a cure for. Excellent write !

[andrew mitchell]

Yes and how one acts clever, jester ish, the comic, the entertainer of high spirits all in one when one is infected lol!

[alifeacoustic]

That damn pesky virus gets everywhere, doesn't it? Hope I don't catch it again this year, the symptons go on way too long :)
Nice job here Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

They do indeed, may 2016 be the year for you Lorry but then again if you do get lucky we won't hear from you!!! Might have to take that back now Happy 2020 instead! lol;). thanks for your great reviews.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the meaning of naked here...just being totally open, honest, trusting and giving...

that is infectious...or if not, there is something wrong with us.

[andrew mitchell]

Exactly jacob! Thank you for your words!:)