On the couch.

On the couch.

The indignation

   of being

stripped bare,

left him cold

on the couch.

 On his notes,

the psychiatrist

    scribbled

  the patient

seems agitated.

Reviews

[softlyfall]

Mine never write anything down, which was good because then he forgot half the stuff I accidentally let slip!
This would be hilarious if there were not a horribly painful, or at least awkward, truth rippling beneath it.
In a perfect world, we could lay bare our inmost thoughts and emotions with our mate, and remain unconditionally loved and accepted. Because I don't really believe psychiatrists have a repertoire of cures, they simply listen (and can't repeat what you say)
This is a perfectly written satire.

[andrew mitchell]

Lol This review made me smile with laughter because as you say , they just listen lol You could recite poetry and all they do is listen lol. Thanks for the review Softlyfall

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, those therapists surely undress us...and it feels alone and cold, because they do not reciprocate...it is totally one-sided.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes they appear cold and clinical not that I've been to one but you see their manner in movies!! Thanks J

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have been to a couple wonderful therapists...but also the other kind...yes, cold and clinical...and too quiet...like i was having a conversation with must myself.

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks for sharing J