The undertow

The undertow

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The undertow
Beneath calm waters
that darkside.
took me in,
not letting go
I was taken
by your friend, 
the undertow.
Thrown against dark waters blue.
You had me dog paddling
on your deep breathes cold
pulling me closer
swallowing me whole.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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there is always that undertow...and the battle of conscience as we try not to give into the dark side---

but the force of that eddy is strong...we just try to swim through the bad as unscathed as possible...

j.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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