just one look!

Just one look!

Seeing her naked

one viewed

her naughty side.

Just one look

was all it took!

Reviews

[Scrap]

....and the rest is left for the imagination. Ure wicked! ;) :))))

[andrew mitchell]

I know!!;) Thank you scrap!:)

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haha you have a very vivid imagination, my friend...smirk

[andrew mitchell]

lol!!! For it has been written thro' the centuries it's all in the undress!! Thanks lynn

[aruntp Thalassery]

Even though it is a very short one. The poem is Simple and Attractive, Powerful and Unique, Interesting and Colorful.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet!

[V]

Straightforward and true perhaps.

[andrew mitchell]

I think the naughtiness is in the eyes of the beholder, she just ignites that flame with her beauty bare! Thank you Vanessa

[V]

I think you're absolutely right with this way of thinking and imagining things.

[dan]

You seem to have mastered the art of writing complex feeling into abbreviated verse. I wish I could do so. My writes tend to get a little verbose. This piece says much in a short space, and I admire your ability to have that effect. Great job! take care...dan

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much Dan, I appreciated your kind words. Its funny when I read your works I think the if only I had the ability to write big poems and hold the reader's attention like yours. I find short is easier but short can be a flop as well.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay Doris Troy---"just one look and i knew that i, i, i..."

[andrew mitchell]

lol thank you jacob