Tug of war!

Tug of war!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Tug of war!
The very essence
of me roped,
every fibre,
my thoughts
entwined.
Stretched
knotted,
pulled,
fraying,
my existence
questioned.
I let go......

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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Less is more i guess it's evident it left an impression on me no doubt about it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Errenn for your review and dropping by. :)
every time someone mentions rope, i think of garth knight & string theory ltm
i adore the compex nexus of your thought, the whorls & hitches becoming untethered ...
... brevity used beautifully
brava

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you katja
Gives new meaning to being roped in to it...
So when the rope gets to tight... let it go!!

bill

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Too right Bill just let go! thanks for the visit!:)
wow bravo, Sir!! this is amazing to say the least...it truly mystifies me that you're
able to weave such a profoundly inspiring write in so few words. love the unique-nes s
of the imagery you've incorporated into this...
thoroughly enjoyed & i thank you for sharing :)
~ x - barrie

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your lovely review miss barrie as always. Cheers! :):);)
ms. barrie

9 Years Ago

you're very welcome...my pleasure ((:

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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