Tug of war!

Tug of war!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Tug of war!
The very essence
of me roped,
every fibre,
my thoughts
entwined.
Stretched
knotted,
pulled,
fraying,
my existence
questioned.
I let go......

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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Less is more i guess it's evident it left an impression on me no doubt about it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you Errenn for your review and dropping by. :)
every time someone mentions rope, i think of garth knight & string theory ltm
i adore the compex nexus of your thought, the whorls & hitches becoming untethered ...
... brevity used beautifully
brava

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you katja
Gives new meaning to being roped in to it...
So when the rope gets to tight... let it go!!

bill

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Too right Bill just let go! thanks for the visit!:)
wow bravo, Sir!! this is amazing to say the least...it truly mystifies me that you're
able to weave such a profoundly inspiring write in so few words. love the unique-nes s
of the imagery you've incorporated into this...
thoroughly enjoyed & i thank you for sharing :)
~ x - barrie

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your lovely review miss barrie as always. Cheers! :):);)
ms. barrie

10 Years Ago

you're very welcome...my pleasure ((:

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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