I'm caught!

I'm caught!

Spidery her web,

gossamer threads floating,

my love caught dangling.

At my peril,

hers on choosing,

I'm lost in love.

Reviews

[Greg Agee]

Your Haikus are great and I know what may seem simple a quite difficult. Good job

[Érenn]

Not sure you know this but during mating season, it's the female spiders who are dominant over the male ones and if the former isn't impressed, the latter is killed, it's love unanswered. ^^. Well if you didn't know this. No problems doesn't matter. Short, smooth and neat and the best part the whole picture clearly seen. I loved it ^^

[andrew mitchell]

I do know, that often the fate of male spiders as is the Praying mantis die after love making lol! Thank you Errenn for your words :)