Ready?

Ready?

I could not tell

if she was ready or not.

But a quick shower, my love;

the rain too soon , heavy.

Her umbrella raised, cold

I knew......

she was not.

Shut out,

discarded,

thrown out,

lost!

The umbrella folded

her love contained,

shakened,

she moved on.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she moved on, and i stood there soaked in her discontinuance...

[andrew mitchell]

Nice finishing touch J

[B. Boileau]

Too fast, Too soon... You need to find a brand of faster woman ...
so ta speak
Excellent as usual !
bill

[andrew mitchell]

haha Could spell trouble! But yes a few young girls I scared off dating in the excitement of being love blind! lol thanks bill

[Érenn]

To take it to the next level of a relation? Doubts surface, will shaken, fear ingrained, so the best option is to close chapter (a subtle way of stating running away). Short crisp and precise I liked this one a lot and i hope you liked the way i interpreted this one ^^.

[andrew mitchell]

Close my friend ,when someone you have a crush on and its so intimidating to that person you scare that someone off in the end, not ready!! lol.

[Érenn]

yup that was the other interpretation I had in my mind as well. In fact it's a scarier interpretation didn't want the other readers to get scared though ^^

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks i like scaring readers lol thank you dear poet