Changes!

Changes!

When the suit

doesn't fit anymore.

When the suite

isn't sweet.

When discrete backseat

becomes delete on cheat.

When defeat on receipt

becomes dispute, en route.

Lawsuit.

Reviews

[V]

Some wordplay, I assume? ^^ Fun to read. Entertaining but still conveying a notion of change.

[andrew mitchell]

just a missmash of thoughts on infidelity, breakup, courts thrown down inspired by reading the news paper lol So much of this splashes the news!

[V]

Oh ok. Interesting ;)

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes I'm at fault not conveying my thoughts out in a larger format having my own brevity style hence the confusion lol Hence the Changes! with this poem lol. Its all fun!

[V]

I like short ones ;) Yours are always interesting and entertaining.

[Érenn]

Wow what a way to express "Things need to change" Change is even inevitable, the world changes somehow or the other every second. Change is also needed to survive. Change of pace is sometimes good for a person. So many interpretations ^^. Love it ^^

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet for your review :)

[Érenn]

Your welcome. Reading your works is becoming a routine for me., It's a joy. ^^

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you I'm so far behind in my reviews so hang in there!:)

[Érenn]

Haha, looks like I am just one of your fans. ^^ Well don't worry I will be hanging around ^^

[andrew mitchell]

thanks so will I lol

[andrew mitchell]

100 r.reviews to do

[Érenn]

Oh my god, well I will be reading something something else and reviewing in the mean time ^^