Wrapped in grief

Wrapped  in grief.

When he left

in a hurry,

a void of darkness

appeared,descending.

Her tears crashing

onto the floor, thunder;

sniffles hurricanes

into tissues wet.

Echoes dance on walls

marked sorrow,

she saw the book,

on table placed,

named " Us."

On the page opened

        she read

         scrawled.

       " The End!" 

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Powerful image of a relationship collapse in so few words, superbly captured Andrew. Sometimes we strive to find the proper words to portray our emotions, write epic opus', yet you have succeeded in sum it all up in so few words. Nice.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Lorry for a great review!:)