Hang on! Don't go!

Hang on! Don't go!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Hang on! Don't go!
A moment's offering.
Quick take it!
Seize the opportunity!
Hurry!
It's going, going, gone!
You didn't take it!
Better luck next time!
When one moment
becomes a new moment
on catching........
suddenly, travelled.....
a road of memories are being laid.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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A poem that made me feel alive...spoke to me of the vitality of life, made up of moments ever so fleeting, waiting to be seized...our priviledge to let them pass away, stillborn, or pave a golden lane of memories lasting a lifetime. I love the way you speak to your readers here Andrew.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words dear poet!:)
DIVYA

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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