When the wheel.....

When the wheel...

When the wheel of emotions

stops working.

Does the poem still continue...

emotionless?

Clinical!

Cold!

Dead!

A miss!

No feelings!

Hasta La Vista Baby!

Have a nice day!

Just doesn't cut it!

Mechanical!

Terminate it!

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

Last time I wrote anything void of emotion, I was writing mathematical equations.... wow.. what does that tell ya ? I need I drink... next !

[andrew mitchell]

lol whiskey!! thanks bill

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if the emotion becomes completely detached from the write, i know i will stop poeming...
j.

[andrew mitchell]

yes imagine robots reciting poetry or even writing poetry without our emotions instilled. would be an interesting concept!!