Forget the cheque, her love bounced!

Forget the cheque, her Love bounced!

When you left

your signature brief;

a kiss planted

ever so softly

before you vanished,

I knew then...

your love would bounce.

Reviews

[V]

Witty, interesting and enjoyable as always ;)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Vanessa for dropping by, much appreciated.

[Érenn]

I donno what the original was like but this is a superb write, I like the line: your signature brief the most though ^^ Again short, witty and neat ^^ Thanks for sharing ^^

[Gee]

Oh my,the original was absolutely terrible,so bad in fact Jacob and myself rewrote,which is now the poem posted.We told Andrew to post it as his own as only the three of us would know the truth(4 now with you).I have to say I'm jolly pleased with the end result.

[Érenn]

Haha I wonder when did Jacob help you guys out not seen him leave any impressions here though. Must have been a secret rendezvous between you two ^^

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Gee for your lovely damaging review lol:):):)

[Gee]

This is a little known fact,but I was actually Jacob's English teacher at his secondary school in Wisconsin.He was a bright lad,but was more interested in women than writing back then in the mid fifties.Show him a bobby sock and a honed calf and the sap was surging.As you can see now,he had calmed down a little.

[andrew mitchell]

loooooooooooooooooooooooooool

[andrew mitchell]

this is my own making, j's would have been better!

[Gee]

Not at all

[ms. barrie]

oy!!! I felt the bite of this, but once again your brilliant choice
of words, dictation has {your pen} has spilled
your signature unique satire, of poetic ink drops
once again...I thank you for sharing & the laughs!
braaaavooo
- xx

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you ms. barrie for your smile from your words :):) here is some back :):):) x

[ms. barrie]

(((: you're very welcome. & thank you! stay sweet (((((((:

[Gee]

SWEET,SWEET,you must be mistaken my dear.This man has just been reintroduced into Australian society after 27 years,4 months and seven days behind bars,most spent in solitary confinement.His crime,well,know, I'll let him explain,shatter your sadly held illusions,delusions even,on the matter of his sweetness...........Morning Andrew.

[Gee]

Oh,splendid write old chap,splendid.

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha Evening Gee You know readers will believe you now! Thanks!!!:) lol

[andrew mitchell]

its been revamped I think its better!