More or less!

More or less!

In the heat,

the moment

unzipping,

lust poured.

Emotions bared,

thoughts fall

onto floor,

black laced.

Little resistance

offered, hungry

love surrendered

for more.

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

And they played the little game called... "Yesssss, No ooooooo ,
why not" ! Fun piece, fun read!

[andrew mitchell]

Yes!! Who Won! Who Cares! Thanks Bill

[V]

I like the way you structured it, it makes one want to read more and more by each line. Your words, the topic read really nice. I enjoyed it.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words Vanessa :)

[Érenn]

Was there really any resistance offered though? That's my only doubt. As usual clever and neat ^^ I liked it

[andrew mitchell]

there's always a little resistance like the chase is longer etc thanks errenn