I didn't need a rudder!

I didn't need a rudder!

Across the table

candle lit, silver service,

the ting of two glasses, smiles.

Impressive, the flirtatious thought

thrown, projected all over me,

hugging, clinging, covered.

I in longing, savouring, embracing,

bringing back time in the moment,

remembering what I had lost.

While the wink of your eye......

had me swimming deep

in your pupil's abyss.

I didn't need a rudder!

Reviews

[ANTO]

Is your keyboard typing your 'b' back to front - or is it my eyes. I thought I saw 'I don't need a rubber!"
OMG xD

[andrew mitchell]

Thats the next poem, running into the chemist stocking up on supplies before taking her home lol