Goodbye All! Thanks for coming!

A crowd gathers seeing someone off only to say what's really on their minds when events change. just mad comedy!

Goodbye All! Thanks for coming!

At the docks, a crowd

cheers, waving.

Goodbye love

Au revoir mon amour

Adios Amigo

Adieu, ma chere

Ciao mio amore

Auf wiedersehen Pet

Bon voyage my love

sayonara watashi no ai.

I listen to....

such emotions of

endearment, adoration,

LOVE!

For ME!

"EVERYONE!

I've changed my mind!"

I'm not GOING!

The same crowd shouts.

Get Lost!

P@#s Off!

Take a hike!

Nick off!

F*&k Off!

Get on ya bike!

Don't come back!

In my world turned upside down

I knew then.....

I wasn't wanted.

They all wanted me ....

GONE!

Reviews

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lol Andrew :) shaking my head at you. Did your mother in law come to stay a while or something hahahah

[andrew mitchell]

Shaking my head thank you lynn

[Mary Helda]

hahahahaha...how true this is...a humorous and clever write... made me laugh so hard..

[andrew mitchell]

haha thank you mary

[Mary Helda]

You are welcome:-)

[K. Harding]

Haha, this is probably the first piece of writing all day that has actually made me smile. I love the sudden, unexpected but realistic twist at the end of the poem. Very relatable to everyone I think and I love the dark humour tones you embedded into the end but the abrupt end. I look forward to reading more of your work. Subscribed!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet

[Einstein Noodle]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuh!? i guess ................... ok José ...i have to say ..this is very weird sir!!! want to ask ..what up?? but ...do not want to intrude ... hope you are well sir!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Just humour Einstein when everyone is wishing you bon voyage with lovely thoughts only to see the back of you in real thoughts when you decide you are not going away the truth comes out. lol satirical in nature like a Monty Python sketch or Spike Milligan, obviously I did not pull this one off lol. I am fine Einstein, thank you for asking. The idea came to me when at work everyone wished this person goodluck on leaving but in reality no one liked that person. It was all just a polite show! Sorry to disturb your thoughts but this was what I tried to re capture and no its not me lol.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhh! perfectly good sense now ..don't know where my head was at on first reading :}

[andrew mitchell]

lol..........................