When the thought won't come out!

When the thought won't come out!

Are you in there thought?

Come out with your ideas up in the air!

Where I can see them!

We have you completely surrounded by the cranial walls.

There's no way out okay!

Put down your shyness!

Come out!

If you don't you'll be lost.

Forever!

Banished like the others!

So lets see you.

Real slow now!

We want a face to this thought!

It's the Thought Police.

We clear all thoughts clogging the system.

Don't make us come in there!

Come on! Talk to me!

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

I had a brilliant review, but it won't come out... maybe next one
excellent as always !

[andrew mitchell]

I was going to name this thought Brian to make it more Funny but might confuse the readers being a thought lol. Thanks Bill lol

[V]

Clever and witty. Fun to read. The thought police - awesome term. Though I don't know why you put it in the story category, it could well be a poem. I mean you have already structured it pretty clearly...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Vanessa for your kind words I was going to call the thought Brian. sounds more funny but may confuse people being about thoughts lol I will change to poem. thanks.

[V]

Lol. Ok that might really be a tad confusing ^^ You're welcome.

[Shannon]

Some a very humous take on such a frustrating time: When your own brain won't let you have it's ideas!

[andrew mitchell]

haha thank you yes indeed!

[Shannon]

Was this in reference to a particular piece of writing that you were attempting to write?