Only then, will you know.

a fictional write

Only then, will you know.

Only when you have

heard Niagara falls.

Only when you have seen

the Amazon river flow.

Will you know....

the sound of my tears falling.

How much I've been crying.

When I see... 

what we have shared,

you just don't know....,

you just....... make me want to cry.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a poem about mass tears my friend. You made your point loud and clear in this poem my friend. Thank you Andrew for sharing your entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

thank you john for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Nisreen]

those falls really fall

i went there and i got soaked
lets hope you never cry like that

or else we will need some rain coats
yellow ones
and boots lol

may you never cry
crying sucks

[andrew mitchell]

Merci mademoiselle Nisreen alias Riversided

[Nisreen]

they call me Nisreen ...... Nisreen Al ALamy :P

[andrew mitchell]

but that's they, i call you .......

[Nisreen]

lol .... call me whatever makes you happy

lol ...... in arabic they call me a flower
but that is awfully poetic

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow this is sad...i have been to Niagra Falls on the Canadian side...and i can still hear the sound...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you jacob. Still haven't got this right with the last stanza but it was a first take but not one of my best lol May alter me thinks