Twas all in the hair.

Twas all in the hair.

In the quick flick,

her hair tossed back,

auburn brown flowing

was all it took

to forget him.

Moving on, taking

the time spent stolen, them;

never looking behind

smiling, she murdered love.

Reviews

[Érenn]

I think this one's about how just the flick of the hair was a sign of rejection. Could be love, could even be a no to a date. Makes me feel prom night went wrong and one didn't even get the dance. Brevity Bravo !! Loved the read ^^ witty and insightful ;) Thank you for sharing ^^

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Errenn

[Relic]

What one can forget, another never will.

Nice one Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Tim for dropping by. Glad to see you are back!

[andrew mitchell]

Yes how true!

[MsJewel]

Sometimes that's all it takes...hard not to look back though...

Love the poem!

Julie

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Julie haven't seen you for a while. A smile it is gracing my page, thank you.

[Einstein Noodle]

sometimes not so easy ... i have to question how much love she had ...but i really like the "attitude" .. just one flick!! :) there was a time that technique would have done me a whole lot of good!! there even was a time i had enough hair to accomplish such a feat ... but i was on the run and young ..no love could hook me ... no need to flick :)

E.

[andrew mitchell]

great days of wonderment no doubt einstein.i remember the way young women had a way of being cold towards myself when not interested, i trying to chat them up or they refusing just one dance lol.

[Einstein Noodle]

so cold of hearts they were ... and looking back not "all that" were they ;) but great days indeed ...each generation has them ... i understand mine and even my parents and grandparents times ..but never could quite grasp my children's and have no clue as to my grandchildren's ..Faith can go along way tho ... ;) sorry ..i seem to be rambling ..love your short packed poem ..sharp images and emotive ... with murder intrigue to boot :)

[Nisreen]

lol

she murdered love with that hair

sounds like a confident one :)

[andrew mitchell]

she got over love with just a flick of her hairlike shaking the memories off. thanks nisreen

[Nisreen]

who would ever want to get over love..... it is life

[andrew mitchell]

some people use love to get their other needs one thinks. how are you today nis! what are your plans today.

[Nisreen]

well to use love is an act of foolishness ..... love is the passion of breathing in every way
andrew i cant do much .... dr placed me on restrictions .... not allowed to leave bed

[andrew mitchell]

wow so how you doing then bed ridden

[Nisreen]

i am getting better everyday my eye can see a bit more ..... so i am grateful

[V]

Love it, especially the last line. Nice images and words.
Why does everyone seem to write about hair lately? ^^

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you vanessa and I haven't noticed about the other hair poems, how interesting lol

[V]

Yeah mine and someone else's sort of linked to mine.