The pile up

The pile up.

an analogy of cars,

small,large, slick, comfy

pile up on the freeway

traffic jammed, delays

so are my thoughts.

Reviews

[Beccy]

Bumper to bumper writ large. Eventually though the lights change and the words break free.

Beccy.

[andrew mitchell]

its the flashing lights of the ambo that scare me. thanks beccy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

our thoughts are often a highway of confusion...and as poets, our pens drive ourselves through...and out of the confusion...

[andrew mitchell]

thank you dear j

[ms. barrie]

metaphorically stunning ink, Mr. Mitchell. the word play
is amazing...& quite unique; portraying frustrations of a traffic jam
to not being able get your words across...be it written or
perhaps verbally. one as of now I can v. much relate to!

I thank you for sharing your immense poetic talent.
~ xx.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you ms. barrie for your kind words