Drained.

Drained.

The build up of tears

          swells

    as pupils drown;

caught in the overflow

the emotional dam;

sadness rains in pain

down the gutter 

        dead

leaving the donor

        drained.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like that idea of the donor and the tears..the dam breaks and the gutters fill...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for dropping by Jacob