Drifting planes of thoughts.

Drifting planes of thoughts.

My thoughts on a breeze carried

like gossamer threads,

floating in space, drifting;

no destination planned,

swirling on....

the tranquility of surprise.

Taking in the views, blue sky,

inhaling sunshine that warmth,

watching clouds, fluff by

on faces formed.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

laying face up in the grass and drifting on a good day certainly is a "tranquility of surprises" which is my strongest felt line .. nicely captured in a delightful, compact space
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Einstein for your kind comments

[Einstein Noodle]

good morning Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

good evening einstein

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .................. its one of the very good things about the web eh!?

[andrew mitchell]

Quite surreal really!! Night meets day as do our thoughts.Without the web, no publishers interested, we would be alone in our writing, a spectator of our own writes.

[Einstein Noodle]

made me smile sir ... how true how true .. and the vacuum would suck the life out of it in no time .. stifling!

[andrew mitchell]

we live in our own universe as writers sharing the space given, open to those who wish to pry and enjoy

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It's an unending journey experiencing life and being ourselves :) I'm somebody new every day...laughing

[andrew mitchell]

lol Reminds me of a funny caption I have 13 different personalities, pick one!