The affairs of the heart.

The affairs of the heart.

When the pilgrimage

for the heart continued

in the search for love

the lonely heart's group

gathered, hoping

for a connection, once more.

As new followers joined

the imbalance

of one species gathered

leaving the pilgrimage

on love wondering

" Who's keeping the score?"

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

To me lonely is a choice ... one I do foolishly make from time to time ... it begins with longing.

I feel this one, Andrew:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your comments pryde

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, there is quite the discrepancy....too many lonely hearts still out there...
always will be, i am afraid.

nicely presented thoughts.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for your thoughts jacob

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ....who indeed ... i am left wondering ... not wanting to be sexist nor politically incorrect .. i believe i will leave it at that ;)))
E.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for your words sir, einstein

[zunie frost]

When the pilgrimage
for the heart continued
in the search for love
really beautiful words
i like it very much !!!

[andrew mitchell]

thank you zunie

[V]

An original take on love again. I love how you weave your words together in different and unique ways. Great piece, the title, as well.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much vanessa