The color of regret, grey.

The color of regret, grey.

No matter,
how many times he tried,
to wipe the black
with the white,
he ended with grey.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. A grey outlook at life and things leave us reaching for little. Thank you Andrew for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Indeed John, thank You my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.

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Truth! Powerful write. Starz

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Starz for your words and coming by.

[ms. barrie]

this is amazing!! adore the vivid imagery you weaved portraying regrets that tends to haunt one...this is utterly captivating ♛☺︎♡

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you ms. barrie for your lovely words and gracing my page.:) So nice to hear from you again.:):)

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, Andrew -- always a pleasure to read your ink...look forward to reading more very soon, dear ☺︎❃✌︎

[Einstein Noodle]

smudge smudge smudge ... oh fudge! >;-
E.
ps. and no one ever got to know him :(

[andrew mitchell]

Haha, it's not a racist poem but
Trying to erase dark thoughts with bright thoughts being white but still feeling regrets in grey.

[Einstein Noodle]

one can take this one in several ways and racist is one of them ..but i dismissed that pretty quick .. i saw any man/woman grubbing around the muddle of clear lines trying to make sense of it all but only ending up making a bigger mess of it all ;) your intent is deeper tho ..positive gurus galore aren't there ... it takes a deep emotional trusting to allow positive thinking get us beyond dark thoughts and circumstances ...says i! ;) for me it is trust in the Creator ... you know ... the one and only :))))
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes indeed and sadly some just live with regrets all their lives which I was trying to convey.:-)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ...very sad loss of life eh!?