Be a good boy now!

Be a good boy now!

Be a good boy

and take your medicine!

So I did.

I swallowed the tablet;

felt sick afterwards,

it was too much to digest,

the whole ten commandments.

There was no grace in being full.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

And then the quilt begins. Perfectly happy up until then.

Very nice my friend.

[andrew mitchell]

haha thank you Willard. Will visit you soon my friend I hope all is well.

[Willard Wells]

Just moving toward another adventure a few islands away.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, those commandments can really fill us up....

our stomach grows from guilt...i was raised Catholic, i know that guilt feeling...and the pills just make us sicker.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob, I was a methodist! lol

[ms. barrie]

oh wow, i started reading this and "white rabbit" ;
Grace Slick started screaming in my head...

over zealousness (extreme measures);
tends to be exhausting & make others around you exhausted from being with you...be it religious beliefs, or whatever else.

again, i always adore your unique twist on the norms of society//society rules (something like that);
...that ends up being wisdom for all of us to ponder upon. i simply cannot keep up with your blazing pen, Andrew...

thanks for sharing - XxX - b.

[andrew mitchell]

I love the long version of Grace Slick's White rabbit goes for 7 minutes. Thank you ms. barrie for your kind words

[Tony Jordan]

I can hear the advertisement voice-over now mate... "Old Testament Acid Reflux?? YOU NEED PEPTO-BIBLE-BISMOL!! Guaranteed to cool those burning Bush feelings! "

- now see what you gone and did A. M.?

xDD

[andrew mitchell]

lmao I'll take 10! Thank you Tony haha!:)

[Tony Jordan]

Haha
Yer welcome mate.

[Valentine]

Boy do you need a good whipping. It was a bad boy that wrote this ditty. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

lol just some fun kathie thank you for reading

[Valentine]

Andrew, we all need something to chuckle about every day. Kathie