Of music shared.

Of music shared.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Of music shared.

You played your chords
I broke your string,
out of tune,
the music shared
had melody.

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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Dissonance - the yang to the yin of harmony - has its place in relationships.
How could we determine the one without the other?
Deep and true Andrew.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Its funny how the male and female come together so differently but complementary in a way as does an.. read more
Tony Jordan

9 Years Ago

Yeah I agree mate.
There's a lot to be said for shared outlooks and interests but it's contr.. read more
The sound not as important as the sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Will for reading
sharing is good..even if the melody is off key...two hearts working together can find the right Chord...maybe as the moody blues sang ..the chord and the word is "Om"---Heaven...OM...

j.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Yes indeed Jacob, thank you
sweetly pensive poem...that's written with poetic beauty, at it's finest!

Thank you for sharing
- X - barrie

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

sorry, barrie...didn't mean to butt in...but love that word, "pensive"---haven't seen it used in a w.. read more
ms. barrie

9 Years Ago

no reason to apologize, Jacob :) ---
so do I, yet for some reason, that word often times sli.. read more
andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words ms. barrie.:)

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andrew mitchell

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