Who drives this heart?
A Poem by andrew mitchell
Who drives this heart?
What is this vehicle
called love
that drives the heart
to a euphoric end
of eternal bliss,
or dwindle into cinders
crashing into the abyss
of tomorrow's sorrows
where cupid's arrows
lay wasted.
© 2017 andrew mitchell
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You could have been a contender...
Good conveyance of feelings driven by strong images. I don't know why I was seeing the flipping video arcade game Moon Patrol. I think it's because your writing leans in the main towards comedy (with a message attached), that there's a mind-association going on when I see your name now.
I wish I'd written this.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words and comments Tony. Haha moon patrol.do you remember the rat patrol? We.. read moreThank you for your kind words and comments Tony. Haha moon patrol.do you remember the rat patrol? Well you,'ve worked out my writings, I'll have to change my format again.lol cheers and thanks for the compliment.this write was written by Tony under the guise of am :-)
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9 Years Ago
Don't remember Rat Patrol - had to MacGoogle that but I do recall (reruns of...lol) Garrison's Guer.. read moreDon't remember Rat Patrol - had to MacGoogle that but I do recall (reruns of...lol) Garrison's Guerrillas.
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" When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..
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