If

A Poem by andrew mitchell

If.

What is life
without the if
but only.

© 2017 andrew mitchell

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Tony Jordan

Hi mate.
i think the last line in this is unnecessary - the three lines previous make the point loud and clear.
A brief but perfect truth.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

thanks tony i 'll probably take the last two lines away.

Sami Khalil

So true and well articulated...:)...................

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

thank you sami

9 Years Ago

You are welcome, if.....lol

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Added on January 17, 2017
Last Updated on January 17, 2017

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andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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